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		<title>Comment on Diary of a Freelancer 015: Exercise by JA</title>
		<link>http://greeninkedits.com/2011/09/13/diary-of-a-freelancer-015-exercise/#comment-52</link>
		<dc:creator>JA</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Sep 2011 21:41:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I hope you save this post to reread whenever your confidence wanes.  Stick with it.  Your talent and skill is undeniable.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I hope you save this post to reread whenever your confidence wanes.  Stick with it.  Your talent and skill is undeniable.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Diary of a Freelancer 015: Exercise by Heather Ohana (@blackdotbug)</title>
		<link>http://greeninkedits.com/2011/09/13/diary-of-a-freelancer-015-exercise/#comment-51</link>
		<dc:creator>Heather Ohana (@blackdotbug)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Sep 2011 16:04:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Couple of suggestions for you:

http://750words.com/
http://writeordie.drwicked.com/
http://typetrigger.com/
http://www.easystreetprompts.com/

Keep at it, dude! :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Couple of suggestions for you:</p>
<p><a href="http://750words.com/" rel="nofollow">http://750words.com/</a><br />
<a href="http://writeordie.drwicked.com/" rel="nofollow">http://writeordie.drwicked.com/</a><br />
<a href="http://typetrigger.com/" rel="nofollow">http://typetrigger.com/</a><br />
<a href="http://www.easystreetprompts.com/" rel="nofollow">http://www.easystreetprompts.com/</a></p>
<p>Keep at it, dude! <img src='http://greeninkedits.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on Diary of a Freelancer 013: Can Something Be Too Poorly Written to Edit? by Jill Groce</title>
		<link>http://greeninkedits.com/2011/09/02/diary-of-a-freelancer-013-can-something-be-too-poorly-written-to-edit/#comment-50</link>
		<dc:creator>Jill Groce</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Sep 2011 18:13:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>If a writer has, in the end, said mostly nothing, we will, in the beginning, look for what they say. When we don&#039;t find it, in the middle, we decide whether to leave it meaningless or to impose what meaning we can. In the end, we respect the writer as much as we can and do what we can.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>If a writer has, in the end, said mostly nothing, we will, in the beginning, look for what they say. When we don&#8217;t find it, in the middle, we decide whether to leave it meaningless or to impose what meaning we can. In the end, we respect the writer as much as we can and do what we can.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Diary of a Freelancer 013: Can Something Be Too Poorly Written to Edit? by Dave</title>
		<link>http://greeninkedits.com/2011/09/02/diary-of-a-freelancer-013-can-something-be-too-poorly-written-to-edit/#comment-49</link>
		<dc:creator>Dave</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Sep 2011 21:21:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The paragraph you just wrote is already miles ahead of a lot of the things I see. I think you&#039;d do fine. :)

I definitely don&#039;t want to come off as discouraging people from writing. I love it when people write. And, honestly, a lot of what comes my way are really good ideas, even well-organized ideas, that would probably work quite well under a ghost writer&#039;s pen. I just wonder whether editing and ghost writing are being confused a bit. Editors, to my mind, help to bring out the author&#039;s voice, not impose their own voice on the work. We&#039;re like voice trainers, helping the author to sing to the best of his or her ability. You&#039;re a bit flat there, hold that note a little longer, etc. When all you get are a jumble of unintelligible thoughts, though, it can be hard to stay true to the author&#039;s voice while honoring the process of editing. Many pieces I get are the bare bones of a melody, and what&#039;s being requested is that I make it more complex, that I sing the song. That goes against what I believe the editorial process to be.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The paragraph you just wrote is already miles ahead of a lot of the things I see. I think you&#8217;d do fine. <img src='http://greeninkedits.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>I definitely don&#8217;t want to come off as discouraging people from writing. I love it when people write. And, honestly, a lot of what comes my way are really good ideas, even well-organized ideas, that would probably work quite well under a ghost writer&#8217;s pen. I just wonder whether editing and ghost writing are being confused a bit. Editors, to my mind, help to bring out the author&#8217;s voice, not impose their own voice on the work. We&#8217;re like voice trainers, helping the author to sing to the best of his or her ability. You&#8217;re a bit flat there, hold that note a little longer, etc. When all you get are a jumble of unintelligible thoughts, though, it can be hard to stay true to the author&#8217;s voice while honoring the process of editing. Many pieces I get are the bare bones of a melody, and what&#8217;s being requested is that I make it more complex, that I sing the song. That goes against what I believe the editorial process to be.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Diary of a Freelancer 013: Can Something Be Too Poorly Written to Edit? by Dave's Mom</title>
		<link>http://greeninkedits.com/2011/09/02/diary-of-a-freelancer-013-can-something-be-too-poorly-written-to-edit/#comment-48</link>
		<dc:creator>Dave's Mom</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Sep 2011 18:48:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think that is what editors have been doing for years.  I have seen countless shows and movies were editors change what the author has written to the point that it might as well have been written by the editor.  Of late I have read some things that were obviously not been professionally edited or even spell checked.  I would like to write a book and have you edit it, but I&#039;m afraid of the grade I would get on my work.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think that is what editors have been doing for years.  I have seen countless shows and movies were editors change what the author has written to the point that it might as well have been written by the editor.  Of late I have read some things that were obviously not been professionally edited or even spell checked.  I would like to write a book and have you edit it, but I&#8217;m afraid of the grade I would get on my work.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Diary of a Freelancer 013: Can Something Be Too Poorly Written to Edit? by Dave</title>
		<link>http://greeninkedits.com/2011/09/02/diary-of-a-freelancer-013-can-something-be-too-poorly-written-to-edit/#comment-47</link>
		<dc:creator>Dave</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Sep 2011 13:31:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>And then the God of Irony punched me in the face and said, &quot;Thou shalt place a hyphen between &#039;Poorly&#039; and &#039;Written&#039; in the TITLE of thy piece, because &#039;twas begun before thy morning coffee was had!&quot;

Whatta maroon. Sorry &#039;bout that, folks.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>And then the God of Irony punched me in the face and said, &#8220;Thou shalt place a hyphen between &#8216;Poorly&#8217; and &#8216;Written&#8217; in the TITLE of thy piece, because &#8217;twas begun before thy morning coffee was had!&#8221;</p>
<p>Whatta maroon. Sorry &#8217;bout that, folks.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Diary of a Freelancer 011: 2nd Story Building by Dave</title>
		<link>http://greeninkedits.com/2011/08/22/diary-of-a-freelancer-011-2nd-story-building/#comment-46</link>
		<dc:creator>Dave</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Aug 2011 17:04:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Christine,

Thanks very much for the nice words! It sounds as though we&#039;re both very much in the same place at the moment... a searching place. For my part, I&#039;ve felt for a very long time like a ship set to sail, but moored by uncertainty. As you know, it&#039;s a hard thing to walk away from a steady job in search of something more fulfilling, and not just because of the risks to self. Luckily, Jen has been an utter saint through all of this, despite my cutting our annual income practically in half while I&#039;m getting the freelance thing going. I couldn&#039;t ask for a more supportive spouse.

I&#039;ve been doing a lot of both writing the first draft of Story 2 and revising Story 1 over the past week, which has left me happy but a) exhausted and b) without much new to report. I&#039;m still trying to find my rhythm with all of this (for lack of a better word). I&#039;ll definitely try to put some new content up here soon, though, even if it&#039;s just pictures of my hammered, sad little keyboard.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Christine,</p>
<p>Thanks very much for the nice words! It sounds as though we&#8217;re both very much in the same place at the moment&#8230; a searching place. For my part, I&#8217;ve felt for a very long time like a ship set to sail, but moored by uncertainty. As you know, it&#8217;s a hard thing to walk away from a steady job in search of something more fulfilling, and not just because of the risks to self. Luckily, Jen has been an utter saint through all of this, despite my cutting our annual income practically in half while I&#8217;m getting the freelance thing going. I couldn&#8217;t ask for a more supportive spouse.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve been doing a lot of both writing the first draft of Story 2 and revising Story 1 over the past week, which has left me happy but a) exhausted and b) without much new to report. I&#8217;m still trying to find my rhythm with all of this (for lack of a better word). I&#8217;ll definitely try to put some new content up here soon, though, even if it&#8217;s just pictures of my hammered, sad little keyboard.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Diary of a Freelancer 011: 2nd Story Building by Christine</title>
		<link>http://greeninkedits.com/2011/08/22/diary-of-a-freelancer-011-2nd-story-building/#comment-45</link>
		<dc:creator>Christine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Aug 2011 14:14:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dave,

Thank you for putting yourself &quot;out there.&quot;  I found your blog through your wife, and I was sucked in by the grammar talk (I&#039;m an amateur grammar geek myself), and I stayed for the Freelancer talk.  I guess I&#039;m not a freelancer, per se, as I&#039;m not working for money (nor am I desirous to do so at the moment).  But I have quit my job in order to pursue... something else.  And, right now, I&#039;m figuring out what that something else is.  Meanwhile, I&#039;m a housewife trying to start a blog.

You are an inspiration to those of us who are trying t figure out their &quot;(ugh) &#039;process&#039;, if any...&quot;, and it wouldn&#039;t work if you weren&#039;t honest.  I hope you keep writing - your story, and here.

~ Christine</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dave,</p>
<p>Thank you for putting yourself &#8220;out there.&#8221;  I found your blog through your wife, and I was sucked in by the grammar talk (I&#8217;m an amateur grammar geek myself), and I stayed for the Freelancer talk.  I guess I&#8217;m not a freelancer, per se, as I&#8217;m not working for money (nor am I desirous to do so at the moment).  But I have quit my job in order to pursue&#8230; something else.  And, right now, I&#8217;m figuring out what that something else is.  Meanwhile, I&#8217;m a housewife trying to start a blog.</p>
<p>You are an inspiration to those of us who are trying t figure out their &#8220;(ugh) &#8216;process&#8217;, if any&#8230;&#8221;, and it wouldn&#8217;t work if you weren&#8217;t honest.  I hope you keep writing &#8211; your story, and here.</p>
<p>~ Christine</p>
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		<title>Comment on Diary of a Freelancer 010: Check, Double-Check, and Triple-Check by JA</title>
		<link>http://greeninkedits.com/2011/08/18/diary-of-a-freelancer-010-check-double-check-and-triple-check/#comment-44</link>
		<dc:creator>JA</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Aug 2011 12:12:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It&#039;s the great paradox of the interweb.  The establishment media get things wrong all the time, (and always have), but - thanks to the interweb which is itself a huge repository of misinformation - discerning individuals interested in seeking the truth can actually find it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s the great paradox of the interweb.  The establishment media get things wrong all the time, (and always have), but &#8211; thanks to the interweb which is itself a huge repository of misinformation &#8211; discerning individuals interested in seeking the truth can actually find it.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Diary of a Freelancer 010: Check, Double-Check, and Triple-Check by Dave</title>
		<link>http://greeninkedits.com/2011/08/18/diary-of-a-freelancer-010-check-double-check-and-triple-check/#comment-43</link>
		<dc:creator>Dave</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Aug 2011 20:02:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A good point. I guess it&#039;s a bit like Eddie Murphy&#039;s Delirious special, in a way, though... Murphy made several off-color comments about homosexuals and AIDS in that special, and, even though he took them back later (after realizing they were born from ignorance), the work is still there, in all its (potentially) offensive glory. The recant, you have to research; the work itself paints a wholly different picture.

I embrace that, though. My feeling on it is that both Doyle&#039;s comments on Mormonism and Murphy&#039;s comments on gays and AIDS were, even if a bit hateful, a reflection of a common attitude of the time, and should remain forever uncensored. Of course, I&#039;m the kind of guy who lobbies to have Birth of a Nation shown in schools, because I prefer to stare ugly, ugly reality in the face rather than whitewash it and pretend things were never so hideous. How else are people going to recognize the blatant hatreds in their own society? How else to realize that prejudice isn&#039;t limited to backwoods hillbillies, but can be rather destructively bred by otherwise kind and/or intelligent people? The responsible tactic is, in my mind, not to censor, but to explain and educate.

Whoa... I&#039;m getting dangerously political over here, and I think I&#039;d rather have my heart gnawed out by a gopher. Next entry will be about muffins and puppy dogs, promise.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A good point. I guess it&#8217;s a bit like Eddie Murphy&#8217;s Delirious special, in a way, though&#8230; Murphy made several off-color comments about homosexuals and AIDS in that special, and, even though he took them back later (after realizing they were born from ignorance), the work is still there, in all its (potentially) offensive glory. The recant, you have to research; the work itself paints a wholly different picture.</p>
<p>I embrace that, though. My feeling on it is that both Doyle&#8217;s comments on Mormonism and Murphy&#8217;s comments on gays and AIDS were, even if a bit hateful, a reflection of a common attitude of the time, and should remain forever uncensored. Of course, I&#8217;m the kind of guy who lobbies to have Birth of a Nation shown in schools, because I prefer to stare ugly, ugly reality in the face rather than whitewash it and pretend things were never so hideous. How else are people going to recognize the blatant hatreds in their own society? How else to realize that prejudice isn&#8217;t limited to backwoods hillbillies, but can be rather destructively bred by otherwise kind and/or intelligent people? The responsible tactic is, in my mind, not to censor, but to explain and educate.</p>
<p>Whoa&#8230; I&#8217;m getting dangerously political over here, and I think I&#8217;d rather have my heart gnawed out by a gopher. Next entry will be about muffins and puppy dogs, promise.</p>
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